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Heartless Lyn @ Great Imaginations

"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost"

Raw Blue - Kirsty Eagar I had to quit at page 80. I couldn't handle the ADHD approach to writing. At times, the actions of some of the paragraphs did not conclude before the writer jumped to the next paragraph. I felt like I was missing chunks of the page as I read. By the time we reach some action, I could not remember Ryan from earlier in the book. The characters and the action were all flat, and the book provided no description. It might have been a writing convention for stylistic purpose, but I felt my attention slowly fading away.I wanted desperately to like this book.